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Reisson Poh's avatar

This piece is uncomfortable in its clarity.

To me, it seems like a drunk driver who passed that doesn't sound regretful at all. He tries to say the empathetic phrases of regret talking about the children he orphaned, but the tone throughout the poem does not reflect that at all. It seems more resigned if anything.

Digging deeper, that might be the reason why he was drinking in the first place. It almost makes you sympathetic for his mental health, though you quickly remember the crime he commited.

This piece is beautiful in its complexity. Love it.

Original Worlds (Ira Robinson)'s avatar

"Give salt and water for the wicked"

I just love how you phrased that.

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