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Dipti  Vyas's avatar

What stays with me is how this poem refuses to treat peace as innocence. It understands it instead as something guarded by those who have already known its fracture.

The pastoral and the violent sit side by side here, not for contrast, but because history doesn’t separate them cleanly. Even the idea of “laying aside a mask” feels like an ache for a self not shaped by conflict.

And that final turn, where conflict is named as part of peace, doesn’t read as justification, but as grief. A recognition that the world rarely allows purity, only responsibility

Parker McCoy's avatar

Even peace contains conflict. It's strange but very true. Even when things are going well in our day-to-day lives, there is conflict lying there, too. Brilliant stuff.

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